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Mastering the Master: Appropriations of Crisis Conversion in Emily Dickinson’s Poems of 1863 By Aliki Barnstone Let Emily sing for you because she cannot pray. (L2780) —Emily Dickinson
Emily Dickinson’s religion was Poetry.(Howe 48)
—Susan Howe
The old words are numb—and there a’
nt any new ones—Brooks—are
useless—in Freshet—time— (L252)
—Emily Dickinson
I cannot tell when I first became aware that she had elected her own
way of
life.(Bianchi 48)
—Martha Bianchi Dickinson
***** On the outskirts of the city of Madison, Wisconsin, where I once lived, a sign in front of a farm reads, All the world guilty before God. The Puritan tradition of guilt and original sin, familiar to Emily Dickinson, has sustained its power for a long time. Indeed to the Wisconsin farmer who proclaims,“All the world guilty before God,” she might dare ask if God himself is te guilty party. “Whether Deity’s guiltless/My business is to find!” (Fr 175). So Emily Dickinson So Emily Dickinson talked with the Master but rejected the orthodox premise for the conversation. In the poem beginning “The Bible is an antique Volume- /Written by faded men,” she mockingly writes that sin is “a distinguished Precipice/ Others must resist” (Fr 1577; 1882). But Dickinson maintained her worldliness as when she writes,“The mysteries of human nature surprass the ‘mysteries of redemption.’” She was an outsider, resisting the religious revivals of her time and her education at the evangelical Mount Holyoke Seminary:
***** The tone of the above 1850 letter—also the year her first poem is dated—combines satirical whimsy with lament. And in the poems written in this first stage of her career, she similarly satirizes election from the vantage of her own exclusion. Fighting off her cultural inheritance, an outsider, she sets her language apart from the voices she mocks, frequently framing the mocked voices in quotation marks, as in these humorous lines at the end of the poem beginning “’Arcturus’ is his other name / I’d rather call him ‘Star’”:
***** In another early poem, she transforms prayer into a jesting nursery rhyme:
***** These early satirical poems culminate around 1863, when she internalizes the battle and begins the second period of her career. (I use “the poems of 1863” as a category because close to four hundred of Dickinson’s poems are dated 1863. This means that she was writing over a poem a day in that year or that she was making fair copy into fascicles and letters at this prolific rate. Whether Dickinson actually composed these poems in 1863 or whether she finished revising them in that year does not matter for my purpose, which is to draw the large outline of her development. Two of the poems, “There’s a certain Slant of light” (Fr 320) and “I felt a Funeral, in my Brain” (Fr 340), that I use as prototypes of her “self-conversion” period are dated 1862. The astonishing number of poems produced in the period in and around the year 1863 shows that during this time Dickinson was deeply preoccupied with an internal struggle with Calvinism and with love. This love–whether of God or of another person–is shaped by Calvinism’s severity, its associations with loss and exclusion, and its power to overwhelm. I believe by writing so many poems in this period, Dickinson performed a kind of ritual mastery over the forces she felt could master her: religion, love, ecstatic experience. Traditionally, Dickinson’s ^annus mirabilis^ has set been 1862, based on Johnson’s dating, is 1862, but Franklin’s 1998 Variorum sets the date at 1863.) She has what one might call a grand intertextual experience. When she writes, “The Brain is wider than the Sky / . . . / The one the other will contain / With ease—and You—beside—,” she observes that the text of the world forms the text of her mind. In a letter she affirms her conversion to poetry: “Let Emily sing for you because she cannot pray”(L 278). Susan Howe puts it succinctly: “Emily Dickinson’s religion was Poetry” (Howe 48). ***** As a consequence of her internal combat with her religious and cultural inheritance, in the second phase of her poetic development, numbness emerges as one of Dickinson’s primary poetic modes. Thus, Dickinson observes that the saved man “hath endured / The dissolution—in Himself” (Fr 659539). Internal forces rage, paining her, overwhelming, dividing, and ultimately numbing her. This numbing is frequently an inner death. Or the self is dislocated or multiple. She depicts this self-division relentlessly, as the first lines of these famous poems show:
***** Dickinson’s mastery means annihilating the self to transform it into art. Her language exceeds conventional boundaries because, as she writes in a letter to Thomas Wentworth Higginson, she is not the subject of a ruler; she has annihilated the governing language of sin and abjectness: “I had no Monarch in my life, and cannot rule myself, and when I try to organize—my little Force explodes—and leaves me bare and charred—” (L 271).(These words in letter 271 scan perfectly in iambic tetrameters and trimeters, Dickinson’s characteristic hymnal meter. Her letters carry the same radical poetics as her identified verse, as well as the same spiritual battle for liberation.) Sixty years before Eliot’s “Waste Land,” Emily Dickinson, in a numb desolation in which no Monarch prevails, creates an intensely personal idiolect and radical poetics, all of which bloom in her own proto-modernism. ***** Accordingly, in this David and Goliath allegory, she regards her earlier assaults as self-destructive:
***** Cotton Mather strives to give himself to God by abasing consciousness. Thus, in his diary he writes, “There is nothing of more Consequence to my Safety and Welfare, than a constant strain, of the most self abasing Humility. Wherefore I would constantly chase all vain Thoughts, and Vainglorious Ones out of my Mind, with the greatest Abhorrence of them” (qtd. In Breitwieser 32). This hunt in which the self is prey is itself a form of consciousness in that it drives out what Dickinson might call “Fiendish” thoughts. By implication, it must maintain the thoughts focused on God, so that, in Dickinson’s terms, God will “remember” and the “Fiend / Let go, then, Overcome.” ***** Dickinson’s doubt goes beyond orthodox uncertainty. She internalizes the conflict—and its attendant doubt—that before was externalized. The numb poems fight dual internal battles: one the Calvinist battle against the self and the other against a cultural inheritance urging just such conversion. The enigmatic poem, “Me from Myself— to banish—” is a model for Dickinson’s transformation of crisis conversion into poetry; it can be read both as a prayer for the self—banishment of conversion and as a description of Dickinson’s poetics. The poem, as in the Bible, proceeds by logical parallelism and speaks in riddles. In the Gospel of Mark, when the Twelve ask Jesus why he speaks in parables he answers that it is to keep the unelect outside, “That seeing they may see, and not perceive; and hearing they may hear, and not understand; lest at any time they should be converted, and their sins should be forgiven them” (4:12). In this poem, as in so many others, Dickinson the outsider adopts the strategy of the Jesus parables, in which, as Frank Kermode puts it, “The riddle remains dark, so does the gospel” (47). Thus, “Me from Myself— to Banish—” poses a riddle that with each line is complicated and questioned, recomplicated and requestioned; with each articulation, the darkness is intensified, but, as in one of Mark Rothko’s dark canvases, there is much to see in the blackness:
***** Since one can never be assured of salvation, it is fitting that a Calvinist reading of “Me from Myself—to banish—” is equivocal. The poem resists theology with its doubting structure in the way each line questions the previous line. David Porter’s observation that Dickinson’s poems move “from belief to questioning and disjunction” (91) is true of the structure of “Me from Myself” which moves from an assertion in the first stanza to two questions in the second and third stanzas. The disjunction is in self from self and, as Dickinson writes in another poem, in “internal difference / Where the Meanings, are” (Fr 320). That is to say, the first stanza states that the exaction of conversion is self—banishment and that the desired result is to be invincible to the temptations of the heart. To shut out the self that cherishes corrupt worldly love would make the speaker free to accept Christ’s love. However, although the poem implies God by the language of conversion theology, it does not mention God (and, as Marianne Moore observes, “Omissions are not accidents”). (“Omissions are not accidents,” written by Moore, is the epigraph of The Complete Poems of Marianne Moore.) By omitting God, Dickinson circles back to the “Fortress” that is “Myself.” In this alternative reading, the double meaning of the pivotal line, “Had I Art,” moves away from the more humble, “had I means,” toward the more self—reflexive, “had I Poetry.” The self wishes to shut out the love of God, to construct a fortress of the self that would be impregnable to God’s invasive Word. In the fortress that she constructs with her own human word, God’s intrusive divine Word will not penetrate. In the same moment that the poem seems to assert faith, it likewise asserts the disjunction in the self—annihilating requirements of Calvinist conversion. That disjunction turns the poem toward self—conversion, which is to say, her conversion to art. ***** The poem’s disjunctive structure is typical of Dickinson’s poetic strategy. Martha Dickinson Bianchi says that the Puritan’s “shadows hung over” the poet. Even after she saw the “fictional quality” of their theology. Karl Keller writes that Dickinson cannot escape the very religious vision she protests: She stamps her foot at what she stands on. She yells at the voice she yells with. Like the Brahma, it is with Puritan wings that she has the power to flee the Puritan past” {67—68}. Seen in this way, the assaulted self in the second stanza is the one who is attacked by its cultural inheritance; she achieves peace by “subjugating” the consciousness that contains that inheritance. The poem, then, may be seeking to banish not the self that resists conversion, but the self that is infused with conversion’s self-banishing theology. ***** Thus, the poem addresses the problem of the split self by suggesting that each self is so integrally related to the other that abdication is impossible. If one returns to the first stanza, one can see that the poem’s impossible formula of self-banishment hinges on the subjunctive, “Had I Art.” “Mutual Monarchs,” “Me” and “Me,” are the author and the Calvinist text, each subject to the other, and each author of the other’s being.
***** As Cynthia Griffin Wolff points out, conversion was popularly regarded as just such “a falling into Love’s powerful attraction”: “For the women especially, this Christ Who came to call for them so importunately— offering himself as the ‘Bridegroom’ of salvation and beseeching them to become ‘Brides of Christ’ by accepting faith—could be a compelling Suitor” (103). Dickinson makes these connections between conversion and both kinds of love, profane and holy. Since she is always turning toward self-conversion, she, too, is evangelical in the sense that she wants the reader to convert to her. In the following poem, she proclaims that “The Saints” will remember her:
***** This anatomy of the soul is also the anatomy of the “thing called ‘Redemption’ which rested on men and women.” Which “fellow” is it who would be tossed away “with a smile”? Breath, Redemption, the stranger, the heart “built by God,” the him, the her, or the it? ***** Dickinson speaks both in the first person and in the third person as Daisy; to say “God made me . . . I did’nt be—myself” is to say “I didn’t become myself by my own volition,” “I didn’t have being,” and “I didn’t have being by my own volition.” She is left in the place where “We must meet apart,” with her art, wit, the blankness of doubt, and “that White Sustenance / Despair” (Fr 706; 1963). ***** Yet even as the letter shows the impossibility of redemption through love, it asserts its possibility by asking the Master for empathy. If the Master would believe, he would convert. He would become a woman: “but if I had the Beard on my cheek—like you—and you—had Daisy’s petals—and you cared so for me—what would become of you?” Even the Puritans questioned whether their understanding of the Word was God’s absolute meaning or a product of Fancy. Dickinson goes farther than doubting whether her perception is true. She takes pleasure in multiplicity and even in one poem declares, “the Object Absolute is Nought.” (James McIntosh writes that one of “Dickinson’s key principles . . . is the idea that belief and thought and feeling are transient, that one’s mental life is continually in flux. Mostly, Dickinson prefers it that way. . . . she cherishes evanescence and makes poetry out of ‘internal difference.”(2)) Although she appropriates religious discourse, she equivocates. Her poems, as Mutlu Konuk Blasing writes, “[rule] out any authoritative reading” (178). The poem “There’s a certain Slant of light” invites this sort of equivocating slant on God:
***** Unlike Rowlandson and Bradstreet, Dickinson is not reassured that affliction is the sign of God’s Paternal Omnipresence. Rather, affliction is the sign of His absence and His inscrutability. Whatever sign the Lord may appear to send only further obscures knowledge of Him, thereby intensifying the affliction. ( As Wolff sees it, “If God’s absence is compensated by words and signs, these are forms that . . . .[insinuate] falsehood into our beliefs-revising our “sight” so we can accept his mutilations without complaint. God urges us to seek Him, but when “enlightenment” comes, it is knifelike and cold-[“a certain Slant of light, / Winter Afternoons-”] . . . . God still refuses to loosen the Seal of Revelation; instead he inflicts the “Seal Despair” . . . . And this, too, invades the coherence of the self . . . . God’s prevarications and false promises call . . . we turn away . . . and still the mind has been violated and sullied-even if only with the desire for hope”(155).) In “There’s a certain Slant of light,” Dickinson appropriates God’s signs and fills them with empty despair. ***** This blankness throws affliction’s “imperial” modification into question. Affliction seems to come out of nowhere, out of “the air”; it has no sign—“We can find no scar”—and no significance—“But internal difference / Where the meanings, are.” Even light, God’s emissary, is merely the object of a preposition, not worthy of being a subject nor of being capitalized. It is the light’s “Slant” that is subject and capitalized. And that slant seems to hit each word at a different angle. The slant is also Dickinson’s oblique self receiving orthodox messages. The poem’s end is filled with loss: the loss of the light and the loss of the speaker and the reader as they exit the poem. The “Slant of light,” in all its variety, refracts infinitely in each facet of the “it” that it illuminates. The light, God’s sign, is multiple, not absolute. Paradoxically, by refuting religious doctrine, she restores God’s unknowability and thereby asserts a fundamental tenet of Puritanism. In her doubt, she is a most pure Puritan. ***** In that blankness is Emily Dickinson’s poetry, a poetry devoted to the unknowable. In her ambiguity of meaning, her fragmented form, her doubt and parody of tradition and God, in her finding her home in the wasteland of self-division and in her transference of meaning from God to poetry, Dickinson anticipated the concerns and techniques of the modernists. Her doubt and radical theology of self-conversion provide her with the language of negation, the tongue of blankness, and the slanted faith of her proto-modernist poetry. Brilliant, innovative, it is her Faith. Works Cited Bianchi, Martha Dickinson. Emily Dickinson Face to Face. Boston: Houghton Mifflin, 1932. Bradstreet, Anne. “Verses upon the Burning of Our House, July 10th, 1666.” The American Puritans: Their Prose and Poetry. Ed. Perry Miller. 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